9. Paper 3 - Include the first draft and the final draft with a reflection on your writing process. Share a meaningful lesson from this process.

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Final Draft







During the process of the First and Final Draft, I had trouble balancing my supporting details (sources) and the points that I wanted to argue about. As for the Final Draft, I managed to balance the points and supporting but it didn't really fit into the main ideas that I was arguing about. From writing this paper, I have learned to balance my main point with supporting details and now I will have to review carefully if my points are conflicting with the main idea of the paper.






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